Tuesday, April 6, 2021

Day 6 ~ Pyramid Poem for "30 poems in 30 days" #NationalPoetryMonth


OK, today we are going to write a “Pyramid Poem.” This is quite simple, if you follow the rules ~ it’s one of those “parts of speech” poems, (great for classroom teachers and homeschoolers). It has some repetition in it, which is part of its charm. It’s a fun one where each line builds off of the previous line as certain words are intentionally carried over.

When all is said and done – if you center the words (which I realize you can’t do in the comment section here or on a FB post) – but when you save it for yourself or post it on your own blog, center the words so the poem is in the shape of a pyramid. It’s a fun little poem . . . so let’s begin:

Here is the format ~ one word for part of speech indicated on each line BUT THE CATCH IS ~ once you have selected a word for NOUN – that same word needs to be used EVERY time a NOUN is called for in the poem, same for the adjective you choose and so forth. Syllable counts, word counts and rhyming are not specific or a requirement, although some may occur, BUT using the same word for a particular part of speech IS a requirement.

Here is the pattern:

Line 1: noun
Line 2: adjective, noun
Line 3: adjective, noun, verb
Line 4: adjective, noun, verb, adverb
Line 5: adjective, noun, verb, adverb, prepositional phrase

Now, if you are not up to speed on all the parts of speech – be sure to read the review that pertains to the following example (I’ll post it right after the poem):  

I found an easy-to-follow example online at www.scholastic.com/ but no author credit was given:



Puffy clouds
Puffy clouds float
Puffy clouds float sleepily
Puffy clouds float sleepily across the horizon

Noun: names a person, place, thing, or idea (clouds)
Adjective: a word that describes a noun (puffy)
Verb: an action (float)
Adverb: a word that tells how (sleepily)
Prepositional Phrase: a group of words that tells where something is or
where something is happening (across the horizon)


And if you need more info on prepositions and prepositional phrases – you will need to just do an Internet search and get some help on it. Cheers!!


And here’s an example I wrote a few years ago:

Sweet children
Sweet children play
Sweet children play happily
Sweet children play happily at Grandma’s house

                                                                                        © 2015 Stephanie Abney


And here’s one I wrote this morning after NOT being able to prepare this post last night before I went to bed! The Internet locked me out and wouldn’t reset until a few hours later. Dang!!


Fickle Internet
Fickle Internet disappears
Fickle Internet disappears suddenly
Fickle Internet disappears suddenly during poetry month!

                                                                                      © 2021 Stephanie Abney

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Unknown said...

Day 6-Pyramid Poems

I tried 2 slightly different forms I found on the internet.

Old photographs
Old photographs teach
Old photographs teach history
Old photographs teach history graphically
Old photographs teach history graphically so we can learn lessons and not repeat them.

Cute puppies
Cute brown puppies
Cute brown puppies play
Cute brown puppies play happily
Cute brown puppies play happily in the grass
Puppies are like soft squishy stuffed animals you want to cuddle
If I were a puppy, I would want belly rubs all day long.

Heidi L. Murphy said...

Here's mine--at least I hope it's my pyramid poem:

sunshine said...

Happy babies
Happy sweet babies
Happy sweet babies giggle
Happy sweet babies giggle joyfully
Happy sweet babies giggle joyfully in my arms
Babies are as the joyful rays of sunshine with limitless joy and giggles splashing everywhere and on everyone !
Blessed is she who gets near enough to get splashed !

Dawnett, Day 6 , April 6, 2021

Connie Cockrell said...

Wild animals
Wild animals run
Wild animals run fast
Wild animals run fast across the desert