OK, today we are going to write a “Pyramid Poem.” This is quite simple, if you follow the rules ~ it’s one of those “parts of speech” poems, (great for classroom teachers and homeschoolers). It has some repetition in it, which is part of its charm. It’s a fun one where each line builds off of the previous line as certain words are intentionally carried over.
When all is
said and done – if you center the words (which I realize you can’t do in the
comment section here or on a FB post) – but when you save it for yourself or
post it on your own blog, center the words so the poem is in the shape of a
pyramid. It’s a fun little poem . . . so let’s begin:
Here is the format ~ one word
for part of speech indicated on each line BUT THE CATCH IS ~ once you have
selected a word for NOUN – that same word needs to be used EVERY time a NOUN is
called for in the poem, same for the adjective you choose and so forth. Syllable counts, word counts and rhyming are not specific
or a requirement, although some may occur, BUT
using the same word for a particular
part of speech IS a requirement.
Here is the
pattern:
Line 1: noun
Line 2: adjective, noun
Line 3: adjective, noun, verb
Line 4: adjective, noun, verb, adverb
Line 5: adjective, noun, verb, adverb, prepositional phrase
Now, if you are not up to speed on all the parts of speech – be sure to
read the review that pertains to the following example (I’ll post it right
after the poem):
I found an easy-to-follow example online
at www.scholastic.com/ but no author credit was given:
Clouds
Puffy clouds
Puffy clouds float
Puffy clouds float sleepily
Puffy clouds float sleepily across the horizon
Noun: names a
person, place, thing, or idea (clouds)
Adjective: a word that describes a noun (puffy)
Verb: an action
(float)
Adverb: a word that
tells how (sleepily)
Prepositional Phrase: a group of words that tells where something is or
where something is happening (across the horizon)
And if you need more info on prepositions and prepositional phrases –
you will need to just do an Internet search and get some help on it. Cheers!!
And here’s
an example I wrote a few years ago:
Sweet children
Sweet children play
Sweet children play happily
Sweet children play happily at Grandma’s house
And here’s one I wrote this morning after NOT being able to prepare this
post last night before I went to bed! The Internet locked me out and wouldn’t
reset until a few hours later. Dang!!
Fickle Internet
Fickle Internet disappears
Fickle Internet disappears suddenly
Fickle Internet disappears suddenly during poetry month!
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4 comments:
Day 6-Pyramid Poems
I tried 2 slightly different forms I found on the internet.
Photographs
Old photographs
Old photographs teach
Old photographs teach history
Old photographs teach history graphically
Old photographs teach history graphically so we can learn lessons and not repeat them.
Puppies
Cute puppies
Cute brown puppies
Cute brown puppies play
Cute brown puppies play happily
Cute brown puppies play happily in the grass
Puppies are like soft squishy stuffed animals you want to cuddle
If I were a puppy, I would want belly rubs all day long.
Here's mine--at least I hope it's my pyramid poem:
https://murph4slaw.blogspot.com/2021/04/caught-up-kind-of.html
Babies
Happy babies
Happy sweet babies
Happy sweet babies giggle
Happy sweet babies giggle joyfully
Happy sweet babies giggle joyfully in my arms
Babies are as the joyful rays of sunshine with limitless joy and giggles splashing everywhere and on everyone !
Blessed is she who gets near enough to get splashed !
Dawnett, Day 6 , April 6, 2021
Animals
Wild animals
Wild animals run
Wild animals run fast
Wild animals run fast across the desert
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