Day 11 ~ How to Write a Dodoitsu Poem for "30 poems in 30 days" #NationalPoetryMonth
Everyone
seemed to enjoy the Lantern Poem, so let’s do another Japanese poetry form, the
Dodoitsu!!
Like many
Japanese poetry styles, this one focuses on counting syllables – but not the
same three lines of 5,7,5 syllables as the Haiku. This one is DIFFERENT ~
Here’s a bit
of background: Dodoitsu
poems appeared around the late 1860s. They were favored by working-class
citizens. The name’s
translation is basically, “quickly, city to city.” Some say that it refers to
the ease with which they were passed along. The Dodoitsu has even been
called the “Japanese
limerick” as most revolved around love, work, and daily life, from a humorous
perspective; so, as a general rule, they did not explore deep thoughts. But
rather, they were used as a way to record those off-the-wall funny moments in
one’s day. I have a dear friend often incorporates poems into her daily journal
as they usually reflect her day. See what you come up with.
Here is the
format:
FOUR LINES: (only counting syllables – no rhyming required, nor
excluded . . . just whatever).
The first 3 lines ALL HAVE SEVEN SYLLABLES.
And the 4th line has FIVE SYLLABLES.
That’s it ~
simple, right? 7, 7, 7, 5. Give it a try. Write as many as suits your fancy
today.
Here are a few examples:
Watching my grandson, Alex
Today we watched a movie
Last time we just played games
Always a good time
© 2026 Stephanie Abney
Taught the boys to do some math
They groaned about it so much
So now they have to shout out:
We love math! Love math!
© 2021 Stephanie Abney (True story)
I love my grandkids so much
They are so entertaining
They melt my heart with a smile
Yes, come stay a while
© 2021 Stephanie Abney
PLEASE
REMEMBER ~
any poetry found on this blog, written by me, is my personal property and may
not be used without my permission, other than sharing it as an example in a
lesson or to read it to someone. The same goes for any poems that are shared in
the comments of this blog or elsewhere online as a result of this challenge.
They are the creative property of the person who writes them. These poems are
their original work, and no one may use them without their permission. It is
understood that they own the copyright to them as soon as they post them.
Thanks so much!
Also,
if you choose to post your poems on your own blog ~ that’s awesome. But PLEASE
don’t just copy and paste my daily instructions, but rather post your poem on
your blog or your FB wall or wherever AND LINK BACK TO THIS BLOG POST for
others to come here to read the instructions. I’ve spent considerable time
researching the poetry forms and writing them up to share with you. Thanks for
respecting my work.



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