Thursday, April 15, 2021

Day 15 – “Shadorma Poem” for “30 Poems in 30 Days” #NationalPoetryMonth


How about a poem that is said to have originated in Spain? (I haven’t been able to document that). I’ve only used it in the challenge a couple of times in the past. What do you say? Want to give it a try?

This poem has 6 lines per stanza. It’s not a very common poetry form and may be new to many of you. It’s called “Shadorama” and it is made up of 6 lines per stanza with a specific syllable count, but no need for rhyming.

It can be a one-verse stand-alone poem or you can string together as many 6-line stanzas as you wish to complete your poem (following the correct syllable count). Most lines only have 3 syllables so choose your words carefully to be able to get your point across. I have often found that in poetry “less is more” and with just the right words amazing pictures can be painted and they can be very thought-provoking.

This is another poem where we need to pay attention to the syllable count:

There is no rhyming scheme but the syllables per line are very precise: 3/5/3/3/7/5

Line 1 ~ 3 syllables
Line 2 ~ 5 syllables
Line 3 ~ 3 syllables
Line 4 ~ 3 syllables
Line 5 ~ 7 syllables
Line 6 ~ 5 syllables
So, here are three different examples I wrote a couple of years ago.
I could have opted for a much longer poem by adding additional stanzas.
But these will give you the main idea.
I can’t wait to see what y’all come up with!! Cheers!!



Fill my heart with joy
Give me hugs
And artwork
They are so entertaining
I lead a charmed life

         © 2019 Stephanie Abney



I marvel
When I pause to look
At sunrise
And sunset
At the beauty of the earth
God has made for us

         © 2019 Stephanie Abney



My grandson
Calls me to come see
He’s in awe
Nature’s feast
He is guarding a treasure
For our eyes only

         © 2019 Stephanie Abney


Your turn. Cheers!!!!


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Unknown said...

Day 16-Shadorma Poem

Jesus Christ
Our Lord and Savior
He loves us
He’s prepared a place for us
We are eternal

I love Him
I want to see Him
He loves Me
His great plan
Makes that possible for me
For us all

Heidi L. Murphy said...

Good morning! Here's my bit: