Today, let’s try another poem that focuses on the number of syllables
per line. It doesn't matter if they rhyme of not. Here is the pattern for a
RICTAMETER POEM ~
A
rictameter is a nine line poetry form. The 1st and last lines are the same with
the syllable count as follows:
*
line
1 – 2 syllables (same as line 9)
*
line
2 – 4 syllables
*
line
3 – 6 syllables
*
line
4 – 8 syllables
*
line
5 – 10 syllables
*
line
6 – 8 syllables
*
line
7 – 6 syllables
*
line
8 – 4 syllables
*
line
9 – 2 syllables (same as line 1)
Here are a couple of examples ~ the first one I wrote
earlier this year when I was in China teaching English – It was written
directly to the Chinese students. I shared it with them as an example of a rictameter
poem.
China
My first time here
I came to teach English
You students were eager to learn
Our team taught you many wonderful things
And you taught us things in return
I hope I can come back
To my new love
China
© 2016 Stephanie
Abney
This second one is a poem I wrote a few years ago
about my youngest son who passed away at age 16 ~
On Missing My Son
Happy
Joy in each day
What great times we all had
Getting through the good and the
bad
And then, my happiness was gone,
like you
Your body too weak for this
world
Until we meet again
Never to part
Happy
© 2011 Stephanie
Abney
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any poetry found on this blog, written by me, is my personal property and may
not be used without my permission, other than sharing it as an example in a
lesson or to read it to someone. The same goes for any poems that are shared in
the comments of this blog or elsewhere online as a result of this challenge.
They are the creative property of the person who writes them. These poems are
their original work and no one may use them without their permission. It is
understood that they own the copyright for to them as soon as they post them.
Thanks so much!
Also, if you choose to post
your poems on your own blog ~ that’s awesome. But PLEASE don’t just copy and
paste my daily instructions, but rather post your poem on your blog or you FB
wall or wherever AND LINK BACK TO THIS BLOG POST for others to come here to
read the instructions. I’ve spent considerable time researching the poetry
forms and writing them up to share with you. Thanks for respecting my work.
1 comment:
Okay. I THINK I slammed the stinking bugs out of that. If not, I'll go and bang my head for an hour and work on my current WIP. So here it is, not the previous one.
http://murph4slaw.blogspot.com/2016/04/eire-rictameter-poem_94.html
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