Perfect for Day 8: let’s try a fun little poem that has 8 lines. It’s called an “Octopoem.” It looks pretty easy to write:
Pick a topic of your choice and describe it in EIGHT lines. Each line can be as long as you choose and does not need to rhyme or anything of that nature.
HOWEVER, the only thing you DO need to follow is the order of the descriptions you use for each of the 8 lines about your poem.
An octopoem has 8 lines describing the topic (or pet or person, whatever):
line 1: color
line 2: season
line 3: place
line 4: weather
line 5: clothing
line 6: furniture
line 7: TV show
line 8: food
line 1: color
line 2: season
line 3: place
line 4: weather
line 5: clothing
line 6: furniture
line 7: TV show
line 8: food
Here are a couple of examples I have written ~
He’s just a good ol’ boy ~ my Jim
His eyes are blue and they twinkle.
Any season that is warm makes him happy.
He loves to be anywhere that his family is nearby.
He’s an Arizona boy because he likes it hot.
He’s not a fussy dresser – in fact, I struggle to get him to buy new clothes.
Our rocking chair is his favorite place to sit, but lying on the couch is a close second.
Any TV show is fine because he’s going to be asleep soon anyway!
He’s not a food snob. The man will eat almost anything I offer.
© 2018 Stephanie Abney
My Grandson, My Friend
His favorite color is green.
He is a breath of fresh Spring air.
He loves to be wherever I am.
We love to play in the rain.
If it's green, it's clean and ready to wear.
When I can't find him he's usually hiding behind a chair.
If “Wild Kratts” is on, we are good to go.
He likes to eat everything as long as it is a peanut butter sandwich.
He is a breath of fresh Spring air.
He loves to be wherever I am.
We love to play in the rain.
If it's green, it's clean and ready to wear.
When I can't find him he's usually hiding behind a chair.
If “Wild Kratts” is on, we are good to go.
He likes to eat everything as long as it is a peanut butter sandwich.
© 2015 Stephanie Abney
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Day 8-Octopoem
The sky today is almost white it’s so overcast
It’s Spring, but it’s a gloomy day
Our life is here in Utah
It’s rainy off and on
I’ll need to wear a raincoat
As we go to sit on a pew
Later we’ll probably watch Little Big Shots
After we have spaghetti with our son and grandsons
When I’m Feeling Down
Some might call depression blue.
Winter rain brings the cold that chills the soul.
All I want is to be home.
Icy rain is filled with danger.
I long to wear my slippers and robe.
If I could stay in bed, I would.
Nothing beats the blues like watching a good old musical.
If you add chocolate and popcorn, I could end up “Singing In The Rain”
Here's my Octopoem!
Little babe all pink and new
Born in the spring with skies so blue
Here in the valley
It will soon be too hot
We’ll strip off your clothes
Lay you in a crib by the fan
And play Baby Mozart
Till you’re hungry for milk
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