OK, we are nearing the end of our
challenge. Today we are doing a simple little Japanese poetry form called a
"Lantern Poem."
A lantern poem is a five line poem in the
shape of a Japanese lantern. Please note that each line is specific in
what the word(s) should be describing and then also note the number of syllables
per line. These poems do not have titles – the first line is basically the
title.
The Pattern is:
Line 1: noun (one syllable)
Line 2: describe the noun (two syllables)
Line 3: describe the noun (three syllables
Line 4: describe the noun (four syllables)
Line 5: synonym for noun in line one
(one syllable)
Examples:
Today would have been the birthday of a sweet
writer friend of mine – she passed away just over a year ago. When I did this
poetry challenge in 2011 she wrote the following LANTERN POEM and I thought I
would share it as a lovely example of this poetry form:
Sin
Transgress
Remission
The Atonement
Debt
Transgress
Remission
The Atonement
Debt
© 2011 Mary
Walling
Here’s another example, from Sally Clark:
Sword
weapon
straight-edged
steel
deadly
saber
Blade
© 2008 Sally Clark ~ (Example from
“The Highlights of Homeschooling: How to Write 30 Forms of Poetry – The
American Revolution” by Teresa Ives Lilly, poetry by Sally Clark) FYI: Teresa Ives Lilly is the author of several Christian romance novels ~ website: Teresa Lilly
And here’s
my Lantern poem:
Trust
Faithful
Always
there
Can
depend on
You
©
2014 Stephanie Abney
YOUR TURN!!
YOUR TURN!!
4 comments:
Love
Always
Forever
Heaven's reward
Trust
Book
Wordy
Treasure-trove
Thought-provoking
Tome
Kids
Children
Make me smile
Loving always
Mine
And for my new graduate:
School
College
BYU
Lost of Homework
Done
Food
Nourish
Enjoyment
Meets many needs
Grub
Spouse
Marriage
Eternal
Making life sweet.
Friend.
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