Day 7 ~ Let’s Write a “Tanka Poem” for “30 Poems in 30 Days” #NationalPoetryMonth

Tanka poems are fun and have very specific rules for the number of syllables per line in the five-line poem; the first and third lines have five syllables and the second, fourth and fifth lines all have seven so it seemed like a good one to introduce on Day 7 ~

TANKA POEMS

This form of Japanese poetry has been called, “The Grandmother of Haiku.” This is one of the oldest forms of poetry. It originated in Japan during the 7th century. Unlike the Haiku, which tends to focus on nature, these poems allow for emotional expression and were often written by both men and women as private messages to their lovers.

INSTRUCTIONS:

A “Tanka” poem is an unrhymed Japanese poem consisting of five lines ~ although, it’s kind of like some crazy “run-on” sentence as only the first word of the first line is capitalized and the period goes at the end of the very last word of the last line, with no need for commas along the way.

Tankas are generally written in two parts or ideas. The first three lines comprise part ONE and the last two lines make up part TWO, which kind of an “answer” or “reaction” to the first three lines. (The first three lines tend to describe what happened, what was felt and/or feared, etc., while the last two lines tend to represent a resolution or lesson learned).

This poem is distinguished by the number of lines and syllables instead of rhyme. Please take care to COUNT the syllables in the poem you create and only use 5 lines. Tanka poems consist of 31 syllables in the following pattern:

Line 1 = 5 syllables

Line 2 = 7 syllables  

Line 3 = 5 syllables

Line 4 = 7 syllables
Line 5 = 7 syllables

Be sure to COUNT OUT your syllables so you get it right. J

(A Tanka poem doesn’t really need a title; up to you)

And here are a few of my past examples:

I look around me

surrounded by family

I know I am blessed

could anything be better

than having a grandchild’s love?

              © 2014 Stephanie Abney

When our eyes first met
it sent tingles down my spine
I hoped you felt it
then we went out together
now we are soul mates.

           © 2014 Stephanie Abney

(This next one is CLEARLY NOT a love poem. Ha Ha)

"Timing of Posts is EVERYTHING"

Feel invisible

even when among my friends

I say clever things

but no one responds to it

darn that Facebook anyway.

           © 2011 Stephanie Abney

REMEMBER TO COUNT YOUR SYLLABLES!!!

Well, I have some assignments due so I haven’t written a new one this year but you get the idea and I’m looking forward to your creations! 

PLEASE REMEMBER ~ any poetry found on this blog, written by me, is my personal property and may not be used without my permission, other than sharing it as an example in a lesson or to read it to someone. The same goes for any poems that are shared in the comments of this blog or elsewhere online as a result of this challenge. They are the creative property of the person who writes them. These poems are their original work and no one may use them without their permission. It is understood that they own the copyright for to them as soon as they post them. Thanks so much!

Also, if you choose to post your poems on your own blog ~ that’s awesome. But PLEASE don’t just copy and paste my daily instructions, but rather post your poem on your blog or your FB wall or wherever AND LINK BACK TO THIS BLOG POST for others to come here to read the instructions. I’ve spent considerable time researching the poetry forms and writing them up to share with you. Thanks for respecting my work.

Day 13 ~ How to Write a “Tan-Renga Poem” for “30 Poems in 30 Days” #NationalPoetryMonth

OK, so don't freak out, but you'll need to grab a partner because we are going to write a “Tan-Renga,” which is a Japanese poem of collaboration. It’s fun, really. Here’s the thing – you will need to find someone to write this (SHORT – 5 line) poem with. Even if you live alone, you can find someone. It can be done together, in person, or over the phone, or via text, or email, or whatever works for you. Your partner in writing this poem can be a spouse, a child, a neighbor, a friend; heck, it can be your mail carrier – just someone other than yourself needs to help write this poem.
 

This basically a Tanka poem (which we did on Day 9) BUT with one catch ~ one person writes the first three lines (I’ll review the pattern for a Tanka poem below – it’s only 5 lines) and the second person finishes off the poem with the last two lines, almost as if in response to first three lines.

The name, Tan-Renga (from Japanese) translates as "short linked poem" or "short connecting poem."

  

Remember how we did the Tanka poetic form? Rhyming doesn’t even enter in. The only concern is the number of syllables per line: 

Line 1 = 5 syllables     (1^st person writes)
Line 2 = 7 syllables     (1^st person writes)
Line 3 = 5 syllables     (1^st person writes)
Line 4 = 7 syllables     (2^nd person writes)
Line 5 = 7 syllables     (2^nd person writes)

 

So, I had my husband, Jim, write this Tan-Renga with me ~ I wrote the first three lines and he responded with last two lines and together we came up with this:

Our life together
Has had a few learning curves
The highs and the lows
Giving, growing and loving
We have become companions

© 2017 by Stephanie and Jim Abney

PLEASE REMEMBER ~ any poetry found on this blog, written by me, is my personal property and may not be used without my permission, other than sharing it as an example in a lesson or to read it to someone. The same goes for any poems that are shared in the comments of this blog or elsewhere online as a result of this challenge. They are the creative property of the person who writes them. These poems are their original work and no one may use them without their permission. It is understood that they own the copyright for to them as soon as they post them. Thanks so much!

Also, if you choose to post your poems on your own blog ~ that’s awesome. But PLEASE don’t just copy and paste my daily instructions, but rather post your poem on your blog or you FB wall or wherever AND LINK BACK TO THIS BLOG POST for others to come here to read the instructions. I’ve spent considerable time researching the poetry forms and writing them up to share with you. Thanks for respecting my work.

Day 9 ~ How to Write a “Tanka Poem” for “30 Poems in 30 Days” #NationalPoetryMonth

TANKA POEMS

This form of Japanese poetry has been called, “The Grandmother of Haiku.” This is one of the oldest forms of poetry. It originated in Japan during the 7th century. Unlike the Haiku, which tends to focus on nature, these poems allow for emotional expression and were often written by both men and women as private messages to their lovers.

INSTRUCTIONS:
A “Tanka” poem is an unrhymed Japanese poem consisting of five lines ~ although, it’s kind of like some crazy “run-on” sentence as only the first word of the first line is capitalized and the period goes at the end of the very last word of the last line, with no need for commas along the way.

Tanka is generally written in two parts or ideas. The first three lines is one part, and the last two lines are the second part; kind of the end result of the first three lines. (The first three lines tend to describe what happened, what was felt and/or feared, etc., while the last two lines tend to represent a resolution or lesson learned).

This poem is distinguished by the number of lines and syllables instead of rhyme. Please take care to COUNT the syllables in the poem you create and only use 5 lines. Tanka poems consist of 31 syllables in the following pattern: 

Line 1 = 5 syllables
Line 2 = 7 syllables 
Line 3 = 5 syllables 
Line 4 = 7 syllables 
Line 5 = 7 syllables 

Be sure to COUNT OUT your syllables so you get it right. 

Here is one of my favorite examples, written by a somewhat unknown, but amazing award-winning poet, Sally Clark. And using a little different take on things, Sally’s poem is about a historical event, rather than a love poem.

Liberty bell rang

in seventeen fifty-three

struck an e-flat note

hairline crack begins to spread

starts split with Mother England.

           © 2008 Sally Clark

http://www.sallyclark.info/ ~ I have Sally Clark’s chapbook of poetry from this link – it is worth EVERY penny. I find her poems so thought provoking. (Just sayin’)

And here are a few of my past examples:

When our eyes first met
it sent tingles down my spine
I hoped you felt it
then we went out together
now we are soul mates.

           © 2014 Stephanie Abney

(A Tanka poem doesn’t really need a title; up to you)

I look around me

Surrounded by family

I know I am blessed

Could anything be better

Than having a grandchild’s love?

© 2014 Stephanie Abney

(This next one is CLEARLY NOT a love poem. Ha Ha)

Timing of Posts is EVERYTHING

Feel invisible
Even when among my friends
I say clever things
But no one responds to it
Darn that Facebook anyway.

         © 2011 Stephanie Abney

PLEASE REMEMBER ~ any poetry found on this blog, written by me, is my personal property and may not be used without my permission, other than sharing it as an example in a lesson or to read it to someone. The same goes for any poems that are shared in the comments of this blog or elsewhere online as a result of this challenge. They are the creative property of the person who writes them. These poems are their original work and no one may use them without their permission. It is understood that they own the copyright for to them as soon as they post them. Thanks so much!

Also, if you choose to post your poems on your own blog ~ that’s awesome. But PLEASE don’t just copy and paste my daily instructions, but rather post your poem on your blog or you FB wall or wherever AND LINK BACK TO THIS BLOG POST for others to come here to read the instructions. I’ve spent considerable time researching the poetry forms and writing them up to share with you. Thanks for respecting my work.