Wednesday, April 12, 2023

Day 12 - Shadorma Poem for #NationalPoetryMonth “30 Poems in 30 Days”

For Day 12 let’s try a poem that has 6 lines per stanza. It’s not a common poetry form and may be new to many of you. It is said to have originated in Spain, but I haven’t been able to document that.

It’s called “Shadorama” and it is made up of 6 lines per stanza with a specific syllable count, but no need for rhyming. Tomorrow we will move away from all the syllable counting for a few days. J

It can be a one-verse stand-alone poem or you can string together as many 6-line stanzas (following the correct syllable count) as you wish to complete your poem. Most lines only have 3 syllables so choose your words carefully to be able to get your point across. I have often found that in poetry “less is more” and with just the right words amazing pictures can be painted and they can be very thought-provoking.

This is another poem where we need to pay attention to the syllable count:

There is no rhyming scheme but the syllables per line are very precise: 3/5/3/3/7/5

 

Line 1 ~ 3 syllables

Line 2 ~ 5 syllables

Line 3 ~ 3 syllables

Line 4 ~ 3 syllables

Line 5 ~ 7 syllables

Line 6 ~ 5 syllables

 

So, here are a few different examples I wrote, one just today about our new adventure (service missionaries to students in Nigeria).

I could have opted for a much longer poem by adding additional stanzas.

But these will give you the main idea.

I can’t wait to see what y’all come up with!! Cheers!!

 

EXAMPLES:

 


My grandson

Calls me to come see

He’s in awe

Nature’s feast

He is guarding a treasure

For our eyes only

 

                   © 2019 Stephanie Abney

 

 


Serving God

Helping others learn

Guiding them

See it through

A better life lies ahead

Knowing others care

 

                   © 2023 Stephanie Abney

 

 

Grandchildren

Fill my heart with joy

Give me hugs

And artwork

They are so entertaining

I lead a charmed life

 

                  © 2019 Stephanie Abney

 

 

 

Your turn. . . Cheers!!!!

 

PLEASE REMEMBER ~ any poetry found on this blog, written by me, is my personal property and may not be used without my permission, other than sharing it as an example in a lesson or to read it to someone. The same goes for any poems that are shared in the comments of this blog or elsewhere online as a result of this challenge. They are the creative property of the person who writes them. These poems are their original work and no one may use them without their permission. It is understood that they own the copyright to them as soon as they create them and especially once they post them. Thanks so much!

*** Also, if you choose to post your poems on your own blog or elsewhere on social media ~ that’s awesome. But PLEASE don’t just copy and paste my daily instructions, but rather post your poem on your blog or your FB wall or wherever AND LINK BACK TO EACH DAY’S SPECIFIC BLOG POST for others to come here to read the instructions. I’ve spent considerable time researching the poetry forms and writing them up to share with you. Thanks for respecting my work.

 

2 comments:

Xoxojme said...

my small dog
perfect cartoon pup
good natured
stays with me
like a shadow always there
never shy to love

Connie Cockrell said...

Been on Vacation with relatives so am behind. Working on the Tan-Renga but have this finished.

Driving far
We take our kinfolk
To local
Parks and views
To see natural wonders
Of Arizona.