Greetings fellow poets, poetry lovers
and newbies ~ so, today is Easter. If this is a day you celebrate, writing a
poem might be tricky today with going to church and probably being with family
for a big meal. So, although I will share another poetry form, feel free to use
a poetic form we have already done this year or in years past or a free verse
poem (so you don’t need to spend extra time learning a new style) and write one
about Easter ~ or not; up to you.
Today I am going to feature a RICTAMETER
POEM ~ it’s another poem that focuses on the number of syllables per line. It
doesn't matter if they rhyme of not. I love poems with patterns because I think
they help you develop skills. I also like the “look” of this poem when you
center it on the page. Here’s the pattern for a rictameter poem:
A rictameter is a nine line poetry
form. The 1st and last lines are
the same (as in, they are repeated, exactly) with the syllable count as
follows:
* line 1 – 2 syllables (same as line 9)
*
line
2 – 4 syllables
*
line
3 – 6 syllables
*
line
4 – 8 syllables
*
line
5 – 10 syllables
*
line
6 – 8 syllables
*
line
7 – 6 syllables
*
line
8 – 4 syllables
*
line
9 – 2 syllables (same as line 1)
Here’s one that I wrote when I went
to China to teach at a two-week “English Camp” during their winter break in
2016 ~
China
My first
time here
I came to
teach English
You students
were eager to learn
Our team
taught you many wonderful things
And you
taught us things in return
I hope I can
come back
To my new
love
China
© 2016 Stephanie
Abney
And here is
one that I wrote today for Easter ~
Savior
Showed us
the way
Served
others all His life
Taught by
example how to live
Through His
atonement we all can repent
And be
worthy to live with Him
Gave His
life to save us
Because of
love
Savior
© 2017 Stephanie
Abney
And one more
– I wrote this about missing my son who passed away at the age of 16 (these
poems are generally not given a title, but I added a title for this one:
On Missing My Son
Happy
Joy in each day
What great times we all had
Getting through the good and the
bad
And then, my happiness was gone,
like you
Your body too weak for this
world
Until we meet again
Never to part
Happy
© 2011 Stephanie
Abney
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3 comments:
Day 16-Rictameter
Springtime
Life renewal
Forever renewing
Just as planned in our creation
The Plan our Heavenly Father gave us
His children's glorious promise
Our lives are eternal
We will return
Springtime
Easter
Joy of all joys,
All death has been conquered.
"Greater love hath no man than this,
that a man lay down his life for his friends." (John 15:13)
His love brings us life eternal.
Sing praises unto Him
Hallelujah
Easter
Great reading thhis
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