So,
today – let’s write one of my all-time favorite poetic forms ~ Cinquain ~
I
love this one so much because although I have enjoyed and dabbled in poetry
(some rhyming and some not) all my life, it wasn’t until I attended a poetry
workshop in the 90s and was taught a few specific poetry forms, starting with
cinquains, that I realized how fun following a specific poetic form (like those
I have been sharing with all of you each day) can be.
Here
is the poem I created that night which pretty much started me down my current
poetry path:
Comfort
Feeling secure
Where judgment has no place
Wrapped in the safety of your arms
Husband
© 1998 Stephanie Abney
Feeling secure
Where judgment has no place
Wrapped in the safety of your arms
Husband
© 1998 Stephanie Abney
I
was taught one way of doing cinquains: following a specific number of syllables
per line with exact requirements – (subject, description, action, thoughts/feelings
and back to subject with a different word) and thought that was it, but have
since learned there’s more. In the past few years I have shared “Cinquain –
pattern 1” and then the next day, “Cinquain – pattern 2,” and thought that was
it, but I keep finding additional varieties so I think I’ll try to give the
directions to the three most common and also a link to help you pick and
choose the style you want, or better yet, try them all out. Good idea?
Cinq
is French for FIVE
The
DICTIONARY says a “cinquain” is a short poem consisting of five, usually
unrhymed lines containing, respectively, two, four, six, eight, and two
syllables.
And
it also says “cinquain” is a class of poetic forms that employ a 5-line pattern.
From
poets.org: Cinquain: Poetic Form we read that the cinquain, also
known as a quintain or quintet, is a poem or stanza composed of five lines.
Examples of cinquains can be found in many European languages, and the origin
of the form dates back to medieval French poetry.
So,
basically, here is what I call Cinquain pattern 1:
This
short five-lined poem doesn’t have an actual title; rather, the FIRST line (two
syllables in this case) becomes the title.
It
does not rhyme and in this version you count the number of SYLLABLES per line and each line has specific requirements. The first line has 2 syllables; each line
increases by 2 syllables until the last line, which returns to 2 syllables.
RESIST the urge to add words - follow the pattern - you'll be
surprised at your results!!
1st line ~ two syllables – the subject
(or title) or your poem
2nd line ~ four syllables that describe
the title/subject
3rd line ~ six syllables that express
action
4th line ~ eight syllables that express
a thought or feeling
5th line ~ two syllables that show a synonym
for title (restates your subject using a different word)
Here’s
a second example of that form:
Poems
Feelings expressed
From down deep in my
heart
So you know who I am
I’ll sing
Word Songs
© 2011 Stephanie Abney
~~~~~~~
AND
here is Cinquain pattern 2:
It
has basically the same format except that instead of counting syllables per
line, we are counting WORDS per line:
1st line ~ one word – the subject (or title) or your poem
2nd line ~ two words that describe the title/subject
3rd line ~ three words that express action
4th line ~ four words that express a thought or feeling
5th line ~ one word synonym for title (restates your subject using a different
word)
Here's an example of this style poem:
Service
Helping others
Let’s work together
Bearing one another’s burdens
Love
© 2011 Stephanie Abney
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Now,
on to what showed up as Cinquain pattern 3:
Cinquain 3 – Poem with
five lines. Certain number of words per line WITH specific requirements:
Line1: A noun (basically, THIS is your
title)
Line 2: Two adjectives
Line 3: Three -ing words
Line 4: A phrase
Line 5: Another word for starting
noun
Here’s
an example:
Babies
Sweet,
precious
Laughing, babbling,
crying
If only they
stayed little
Adorable
© 2011 Stephanie Abney
No
doubt, other variations exist – but this should do it for now on CINQUAINS!!
Enjoy!
PLEASE REMEMBER ~
any poetry found on this blog, written by me, is my personal property and may
not be used without my permission, other than sharing it as an example in a
lesson or to read it to someone. The same goes for any poems that are shared in
the comments of this blog or elsewhere online as a result of this challenge.
They are the creative property of the person who writes them. These poems are
their original work and no one may use them without their permission. It is
understood that they own the copyright to them as soon as they post them.
Thanks so much!
Also, if you choose to post
your poems on your own blog ~ that’s awesome. But PLEASE don’t just copy and
paste my daily instructions, but rather post your poem on your blog or your FB
wall or wherever AND LINK BACK TO THIS BLOG POST for others to come here to
read the instructions. I’ve spent considerable time researching the poetry
forms and writing them up to share with you. Thanks for respecting my work.
3 comments:
Husband
Kind, thoughtful, sweet
Hard working, committed
Always takes good care of his wife
My love
Day 22-Cinquain poems
Mem'ry
Love from the past
Forever in my heart
Not gone, long as I remember
Mind's eye
Grandchildren
Next generation
Keeps us alive
We are never forgotten
Descendants
Here is where you'll find my offering this morning. Thanks so much for spear heading this effort, Stephanie. It's been fun!
https://murph4slaw.blogspot.com/2017/04/cinquain-poems-national-poetry-month.html
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