Day 25 ~ Diatelle Poem

Okay – this poetry challenge is almost over. It’s been lots of fun. I hope you have been enjoying yourself. I think you’ve proven you are all up for a new challenge – I have only shared this poetic form twice in the ten years I’ve been doing poetry month. So, I figure maybe it’s time to use it again. Ya’ ready????

Writing a DIATELLE POEM can be a bit tricky – it’s still all about counting syllables (remember, there IS a syllable counter online if you need it) and about rhyming CERTAIN lines SPECIFICALLY with other lines. If you DON’T follow it precisely, you won’t get the desired result – you’ll get a poem, no doubt, just not a “Diatelle Poem” which is today’s poetry form.

It’s a fairly new form created by Bradley Vrooman. So since I STILL haven’t even attempted this form yet (that’s kind of embarrassing), I’m using Bradley Vrooman’s poem as an example, with the syllable count per line in blue and the rhyming pattern in red to make it easy to see the format. I hope to get back to add in one or two of my own. In the meantime, let’s see what you come up with ~ I’ve included a pretty nifty chart to help with the details:

It looks best if you can center it – kind of has a diamond shape because of the order of the syllable count, which is: 1-2-3-4-6-8-10-12-10-8-6-4-3-2-1,

And it has a VERY SPECIFIC RHYMING PATTERN – every line that ends with the "A pattern" – needs to rhyme with each other. The same for letters B and C ~ here is the pattern to follow:

A-B-B-C-B-C-C-A-C-C-B-C-B-B- A

So, you can see it will be a bit trickier than those we have done in the past – but I bet it’s one you probably haven’t heard much of before – that’s what I was going for – something new.

I created a little pattern box to help you sort it all out – see below –

Bradley Vrooman’s Example: Smooth Sailing                                Walk (Syllable count 1 - rhyme: a) With me (2 - b) And simply (3 - b) With arms around (4 - c) Each other's waist, happy (6 - b) Moving about the day, as bound (8 - c) As ever can be, with true love abound (10 - c) Lay with me all day and all night, my world you rock (12 - a) Passion’s fire, a desire induced by sound (10 - c) Pure as light, each spectrum surround (8 - c) Hypnotized as can be (6 - b) Love that’s profound (4 - c) Spoken free (3 - b) With me (2 - b) Talk(1 - a) - written by Bradley Vrooman

Diatelle Poetry Chart ~ match the ending rhyming words with the same color (grey columns are because NONE of the lines end in that number of syllables).

		1	2	3	4	5	6	7	8	9	10	11	12
1	A
2	B
3	B
4	C
6	B
8	C
10	C
12	A
10	C
8	C
6	B
4	C
3	B
2	B
1	A

 The above example uses Caps at the beginning of each line. There is no rule on if or when to use them. Just do what works for your poem. Cheers!!

GOOD LUCK!! Whatcha’ got?

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