Day 2 ~ Tanka

“Telling Tales with Tankas” ~ Today’s poem is an ancient form of Japanese poetry, “Tanka,” which has been called, “The Grandmother of Haiku.” This is one of the oldest forms of poetry. It originated in Japan during the 7th century. Unlike Haiku, which we will do later on and which tends to focus on nature, these poems allow for emotional expression and were often written by both men and women as private messages to their lovers. Tanka poems usually tell a short little story about love, a moment, an event, a feeling, etc.

INSTRUCTIONS:

A “Tanka” poem is an unrhymed Japanese poem consisting of five lines ~ actually, it’s kind of like some crazy “run-on” sentence as only the first word of the first line is capitalized and the period goes at the end of the very last word of the last line, with no need for commas along the way.

Tanka is generally written in two parts or ideas. The first three lines is one part, and the last two lines are the second part; kind of the end result of the first three lines. (The first three lines tend to describe what happened, what was felt and/or feared, etc., while the last two lines tend to represent a resolution or lesson learned).

This poem is distinguished by the number of lines and syllables instead of rhyme. Please take care to COUNT the syllables in the poem you create and only use 5 lines. Tanka poems consist of 31 syllables in the following pattern:

Line 1 = 5 syllables

Line 2 = 7 syllables  

Line 3 = 5 syllables

Line 4 = 7 syllables
Line 5 = 7 syllables

Be sure to COUNT OUT your syllables so you get it right. This is a poetry form, not free verse so we follow the instructions. J Here is that handy little syllable counter if you need it: SYLLABLE COUNTER 

 

You will probably have to go back and turn the beginning of each line back into a lower case letter as your word program is going to want to capitalize the first letter of each line.

 

And here are a couple of my past examples and a brand new one this year:

 

“Timing of Posts is EVERYTHING”

 

Feel invisible

even when among my friends

I say clever things

but no one responds to it

darn that Facebook anyway.

© 2011 Stephanie Abney

 

(A Tanka poem doesn’t really need a title; up to you)

I look around me
surrounded by family
I know I am blessed
could anything be better
than having a grandchild’s love? 

© 2014 Stephanie Abney

 

I pause at day’s end
and reflect on my blessings
I lead a charmed life
a grandchild climbs on my lap
that is all the proof I need.

© 2022 Stephanie Abney

 

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