Day 7 2025 ~ Let’s write a “Color Poem” for #NationalPoetryMonth ~ "30 poems in 30 days"

OKAY!! NO COUNTING SYLLABLES today!! But you will need to deal with some grammar, so please pay attention ~ ha ha!! One metaphor and 3 similes to be precise.

Today, let’s do a simple little poetic form: a “COLOR POEM.” There are actually several ways to write a color poem if you care to Google it, but for our purposes, we are going to follow this one. It’s sweet and simple. I like it because it has a metaphor and three similes, and the teacher in me is partial to using parts of speech when writing poetry. So here goes:

This poem is just four lines. It's so short and simple that perhaps you will want to do several color poems using a different color each time.

REMEMBER:

A “metaphor” uses the word is. It’s a figure of speech in which a term or phrase is applied to something to which it is not literally applicable in order to draw a comparison. It is not the same as a simile.

A “simile” uses the word like or as in order to make a comparison, whereas metaphors use is or are. So if you say “If I were” or “If you were” and named the thing (noun), it is a metaphor.

A metaphor: Your hair is golden flax.

A simile: Your hair is like golden flax.

Here is the pattern for our color poem:

Your first line will name a color, and then the poem goes on to describe that color using one metaphor and three similes.

Line 1: metaphor ~ what “feeling” does this color give you – call it that
Line 2: simile ~ example using a simile
Line 3: simile ~ another example using a simile
Line 4: simile ~ final example using a simile

And that’s as easy as it gets!!

 

Here are a couple of examples for you:

Pink is happy.
Like the laughter of a child.
Like hanging out with your family.
As joyful as your best day ever.

© 2025 Stephanie Abney

 

Blue is peace.
Like the end of a perfect day.
Like the smile of a newborn
As comforting as a downy quilt.

© 2017 Stephanie Abney

 

 Your turn!! Cheers!!

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