Thursday, April 13, 2017

Day 13 ~ How to Write a “Tan-Renga Poem” for “30 Poems in 30 Days” #NationalPoetryMonth


OK, so don't freak out, but you'll need to grab a partner because we are going to write a Tan-Renga,” which is a Japanese poem of collaboration. It’s fun, really. Here’s the thing – you will need to find someone to write this (SHORT – 5 line) poem with. Even if you live alone, you can find someone. It can be done together, in person, or over the phone, or via text, or email, or whatever works for you. Your partner in writing this poem can be a spouse, a child, a neighbor, a friend; heck, it can be your mail carrier – just someone other than yourself needs to help write this poem.
 
This basically a Tanka poem (which we did on Day 9) BUT with one catch ~ one person writes the first three lines (I’ll review the pattern for a Tanka poem below – it’s only 5 lines) and the second person finishes off the poem with the last two lines, almost as if in response to first three lines.

The name, Tan-Renga (from Japanese) translates as "short linked poem" or "short connecting poem."
  
Remember how we did the Tanka poetic form? Rhyming doesn’t even enter in. The only concern is the number of syllables per line: 


Line 1 = 5 syllables     (1st person writes)
Line 2 = 7 syllables     (1st person writes)
Line 3 = 5 syllables     (1st person writes)
Line 4 = 7 syllables     (2nd person writes)
Line 5 = 7 syllables     (2nd person writes)



 


So, I had my husband, Jim, write this Tan-Renga with me ~ I wrote the first three lines and he responded with last two lines and together we came up with this:




Our life together
Has had a few learning curves
The highs and the lows
Giving, growing and loving
We have become companions



© 2017 by Stephanie and Jim Abney




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3 comments:

Carroll Morris said...

You guys look so sweet together!

Heidi Murphy said...

I think we're still on the roller coaster upside down...:o) You guys are very cute and such a great example.

Anywho, here's my offering:

https://murph4slaw.blogspot.com/2017/04/these-are-combined-effort-poems-called.html

Slainte, Stephanie.

Peggy Barker said...

"Service"

Tying quilts means fun,
For humanitarian.
Service for others,
Square knots of yarn wrapped in love,
Errand of Father above.

By Peggy Barker & Lilly Heiner